your comments

i read your comments and i liked them. here is the poem.i do to have time to write the story.and when is said the story"mom said no"i didn;t mean my real mom.a fake one.

                                                 people

people are great

sometimes they are late,

for what guys  asks

for there tasks

to finish

sometimes like me

as you can see

going to school

and finishing my yongduel(yong;a'du'l)

my friend melody

like my self.

have a fun day everyone.i will adda poll tomarow