Wednesday, March 17, 2010

your comments

i read your comments and i liked them. here is the poem.i do to have time to write the story.and when is said the story"mom said no"i didn;t mean my real mom.a fake one.

people are great
sometimes they are late,
for what guys  asks
for there tasks
to finish
sometimes like me
as you can see
going to school
and finishing my yongduel(yong;a'du'l)
my friend melody
like my self.

have a fun day everyone.i will adda poll tomarow

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